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January 30, 2013
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ADH TRINITY by edenfox ADH TRINITY by edenfox
Oops, I forgot I should speak English, sorry.
Anyway, I spend more than 20 hours to finish this painting, all three girls are my original characters.

Left: Beatrice…

middle: Lumi

right: Annastasia…

呼,断断续续两个月终于画完了。z总共20多个小时 本来想用这张图做个“过程付”呢,结果因为太长了,中间改动用太多。所以还是算了,以后找张简单点在做吧。 人物嘛是我原创的,其实以前都画过, 左边:Beatrice 中间:Lumi 右边:Annastasia
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I may not be able to colour like this, so either listen or ignore the following:

The face of the middle girl seems like it's missing a shadow under the hairline and the eye brows.
As for the background and foreground I suggest the background to be darken around the middle and blue chick, as my eye mainly focuses on the end (red) chick because the background is darker beside/behind her and makes the red one jump out first.

Maybe even darken the left side where the blue angel in order to even it up and creates that middle focus point because if you cut the girls off at the middle of the hips and above the circle with the fish inside using your hands to make a box you can see the middle area is beautifully focused on the girls but as you move your hand away the focus isn't as dominating, which can be easily fixed.... well so i think... it looks easy even though I know it's not, hahaha

I quite enjoy the middle chick is holding her friends, that looks very effective. As well as the amount of detail put into this work. I like how you didn't make the red and blue arms on the same level/ position. Although would have extended the red's hand to her chest so it creates this look l>lOtherwise beautiful as always :D
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TsukiShinju Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The detail you put into your pieces is amazing! Keep up the good work!
BreathFlux Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Really beautiful.
FARTYTREEFROG Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
OH JOY !!--a dazzling cocktail of costume and colour.
LanaT35 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
So much talent squeezed in all your art. :-)
Lizz05 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW!! Just WOW!!
dashahead Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Have you ever wake up and feeling like ... "I'm justtoo awesome... My God... " because you should
FuakHUE Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
oh wow!
bluerosefantasy Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Artist
Beautiful work! ^^
HakuyaH Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hermafrodite Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
thers a bit much goin on in this one buti like it any way
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