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Poker Shoujo Falling Dreams by edenfox Poker Shoujo Falling Dreams by edenfox
same girl as [link]

But it seems my style changes a lot.
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Very captivating. If you ever attempt a similar piece, here's two things you could look out for. Fielding; even though the camera is tilted, I would rotate this canvas maybe 15 degrees counter-clockwise, because her face, where our eyes are drawn, would almost look as if it were shooting a stare past us. In short, the drama of your scene intensifies. Design; your colours are great, but I think there are too many spirals in the lines of fire. If you space them out more it would look more dramatic and illustrate the motion of the bullets better.

Mind you, my critique is from the stand point of an animator/board artist, so film language is what I'm talking about. But this painting clearly has a story, and an intense one at that, so I hope the crit helps. Very stunning work, mate. I particularly like the design for the boots!
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roboconrobo Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great work!! :D
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ArtCrawl Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So cool. Looks like it was a lot of work to make. :D
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Aplos Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
cool!!
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Metalraptor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so epic; amazing work. ^_^
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Surirasu Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Whoa this is amazilng!!!
*o* Keep up the awshom work!!!
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Jessica-Prando Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice!!
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reninjart Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
excelent!
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SimZz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow. Just Wow.
Amazing as usual. But I want to says also: More dynamic than usual, which isn't a bad thing, far from it!
Just keep up the breath-taking work, you god-like talented person!
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Vongolaa Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
whoa!! awesome!!
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LadyxWinter Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
stunning,really amazing :heart:
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